Ethos: The ethos of my speech is basically the fact that it is my life. I know myself better than everyone in the room. However, how I will go about proving that credibility to the class will to be supporting my statements of my life with a story following the statements. My weak points are definitely eye contact and not moving around the room enough. I also struggle with keeping my thoughts in place when in front of an audience such as this. It's kind of intimate in a way. At least compared to a room full of 100 people. I can overcome my weak points by drilling my speech into my brain and planning out my movements. By practicing so much hopefully I can surpass that line of over control and tightness in my speech and develop a more natural way of performing my speech. My content is lacking in general because I'm finding it hard to find a good connection between my "different identities."
Pathos: The pathos… I don't really have much of an idea of what my emotional responses will consist of. However, I know what approaches I absolutely don't want to take. I'm not going to try to be funny. That can go terribly wrong. The emotions I may try to go for are hopefully some on a level of connectivity and the feeling of having something in common.
Logos:
1. Intro: My career, family, and entertainment personalities are extremely closely related. The 3 Chloe's. The paternal triplets.
2. Body:
a. Career: Future: I plan on becoming a business woman, but perhaps not in the general stereotype. I don't plan on wearing a suit or having my hair in a tight bun everyday. I don't plan on being conservative. As a future member of the fashion industry, I plan on going into it as myself with a professional air about me however, I'll be the same Chloe. Perhaps a little less inappropriate as my family and friend self. I want to be in a laid back work environment because I thrive in relaxed situations.
b. Family: Only child, oldest grandchild by 10 years. Quite goofy with my family. Family is extremely relaxed.
c. Entertainment: I act as I do with my friends as I do with my family. Only more inappropriate. The main difference between the other Chloe triplets is that entertainment Chloe tends to let herself become almost completely vulnerable, which is such a gratifying feeling.
I'm trying to use relaxation and vulnerability as my main form of repetition. I constantly aim for and put myself in situations that support relaxation. I'm even hoping to model my future career with relaxation and vulnerability allowed and accepted since it's such an important part of my life currently.
3. Conclusion:
For my conclusion, I think I'll briefly summarize… Maybe I'll even say "In conclusion." The end is still undecided.
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